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~Wake Me Up Before You Go-Go~

The sandy blond laid in the bed looking up at the ceiling with disgust.  The person at the door kept hitting that damn little doorbell button and would not leave!  It had been going on for at least ten minutes!  What kind of person would do this on a Saturday?  The day he finally had off from meetings or any other tedious trials in life.  

That person out there really laid on the doorbell now.  Tossing the plush red and blue covers off himself and onto the floor, he pulled himself out of the bed.  Adjusting himself in certain places he cursed the world and the person that disturbed him.  They better not bring him the good word or someone above better help them.  And screw them he wasn't about to put pants on.  His boxers with little hamburgers on them would be good enough!  Grabbing his glasses off the nightstand he started to the door.

"What!?" He yanked the door open to his home, surprised that no one was there.  Of course they would leave once he got up, that's how it always worked.  Saying a few blasphemous words he went to shut the door but something caught his eyes.  The small shine of (h/c) hair in the bright morning sun light.  He cocked his head to the side at the curious little sight in front of him.  It was a girl with big (e/c) eyes staring at him.   She hung on tight to a purple book bag in front of her.  

"Here," she whispered and held a folded note to the shocked American.  

Dear Alfred,
You probably don't remember me, after all it was almost five years ago.  I was one of the waitresses at the meeting in Toronto.  I won't go into detail on what is happening with me, but I'm sick.  And I won't be getting any better.  This is our daughter (f/n).  There isn't anyone else to take care of her.  Can you please watch her and make sure you give her the best life possible.


"Daughter?" He looked down at the little girl who now was staring at her pink sneakers.  He crinkled the note in his hand in frustration.  

Was this even possible?  He was in Toronto about five years ago.  And there was that one waitress.  She was pretty with long glossy brown hair going down her back and big green eyes.  But it was one night! Well, multiple times in that one night.  But how could this happen?  He was the United States of America!  The damn hero and all that jazz; he wasn't a father, daddy, or Papa.  

Sure he had 'raised' his states and such.  But then again he never raised them hands on!  And look at some of them.  A few of the states where shoot-'um-up and death penalty loons.  Then you had the peace loving and let's-hug-our-problems away freaks.  And let's not forget the ones that wanted to break away awhile back.  So maybe his fatherly influence wasn't in great supply with those ones.

He uncrumpled the note and read it again.  No name on the bottom.  That waitress probably thought he would at least have the decency to remember her name and he didn't.  

"Are you shy or something?"  His asked the mute girl that shot her head up.  On the rims of her eyes were tears that wanted to break through.  She shook her head and caused her hair to sway side to side.  

"I wanna go home!"  She started to cry and dropped to the grey stone steps.  "I miss my Mommy!"

"Oh crap!  Don't cry…" he scanned the paper for her name.  "(f/n)!  Don't cry (f/n)!"

"What's your name?"  She wiped the tears from her cheeks.  

"Alfred," he bit the inside of his cheek.  He wondered if he should tell her that he was in fact her father.  

"Alfred F. Jones?"  Her eyes lit up a little at his statement.  "You're my Daddy!"

Guess the cat was out of the bag.  "That's me."  

So enter the stupor that Mr. America was about to go into.  Walking to the couch, he dropped down into the soft cushions.  (f/n) let herself in and shut the door that Alfred had left opened.  He stared off into space as nothingness blew threw his mind.  What was he going to do with a child?  He had things to do!  Like video games, scary movies, and annoying England!  How in the wide world of hamburgers was he going to do that with a kid in toe?

"I'm glad I finally get to meet you," she smiled pulling herself onto the couch.  She snuggled into his side.   "Mommy said we can be a family."

He glanced down at the tiny figure that clung to his side.  He knew he had to do something.  And the first was going to be calling someone who had some prior knowledge on children. Granted he wasn't that great…okay he sucked.  But maybe a little help from that person wouldn't be that bad.  Just do the opposite of everything England said. That's a plan!

To be continued!
This is a request for :iconjessie1209:! Enjoy!!


Sorry if it had a Big Daddy feel to it....It's one of those stories I've got to make into a lil' series...wait for the fluff to kill ya! And yeah I didn't make her super shy...yet! Now on to the other requests!

And as always I don't own Hetalia and sorry for spelling/grammar! Find a typo? Misspelled words or something silly? Please, kindly, tell me. I try my best to improve my grammar and spelling on these things, but like anyone I miss somethings.

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Ellieluvsstuff Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2015  Student General Artist
OMG!!!!!This TOTALLY works for me!!!!!! Alfred has blue eyes and I got my blue eyes from my father and my mom has brown hair and green eyes!!!!! IT'S PERFECT!!!!! XD
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SilverPhoenix14 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014
I have green eyes and brown hair XD
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:iconkathybrine:
KathyBrine Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Student Digital Artist
So close.....I have brown hair and brown eyes....
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:iconwholewheathoneyoat:
WholeWheatHoneyOat Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013
I have brown hair and blue eyes. I am without a doubt America's kid!!!! *^_^*
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:icongizmojax:
GizmoJax Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:aww:
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:iconramenbaka11:
ramenbaka11 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013
I have dirty blonde hair and blue eyes.... guess I didn't get any maternal genetics....
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:icontainted5pirit:
Tainted5pirit Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
can she have daddy's cowlick?? XD
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nicole142518 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013
Awww what a cute story, and funny.
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:icongizmojax:
GizmoJax Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :aww:
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:iconnicole142518:
nicole142518 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013
Your welcome
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:iconjdb236:
JDB236 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013
Hahaha! I remembered the movie " The Game Plan" while reading this ^^ It's so funny!
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hunnybee07art Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha, so did I xD
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:iconwholewheathoneyoat:
WholeWheatHoneyOat Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013
Me too! *^_^*
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furchild1204 Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I just have one question: how the f@ck does a dad with blonde hair and blue eyes + a mom with brown hair and green eyes =girl with caramel hair and hazel eyes? Just asking.
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GizmoJax Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, I guess it's just genetics? The genetics of eye color is very complicated, but it is possible for it to happen. For the hair, a recessive color gene in one parent came through and mixed with another gene. That's if you wanted to look at the scientific aspect of it.

If I came off as rude with that, sorry. I really didn't mean too! But, I do enjoy when a reader poses a challenge. :)

Also, I was waiting for this question! I knew that someone would ask it one day, lol. All those days listening to my teacher finally come in handy.

And as always, thank you for reading and commenting!
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furchild1204 Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
'It was only one night! Well, multiple times in that one night.'
Me: :icongermanyfacepalmplz:
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Pastalover12 Featured By Owner May 18, 2013
My mom looks exactly like how she was described....
Are you stalking me?
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:icongizmojax:
GizmoJax Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol, I stalk a lot of people...so maybe..XD
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Wafflemonkey12 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013
Y does this remind me of the game plan
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:iconawesomebunnys:
awesomebunnys Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013
I love that plan!!
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Silvermoonlitsoul Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This was so cute...but that letter broke my heart. :iconsobsplz:
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monkeylvr13 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
awww!! oh no, alfred will be in trouble soon!!!!!!!
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SecretlySpain Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012   Writer
Er mer gerd it kinda reminds me of the movie the Game Plan. :D Luv da story!
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SmexyHajiSan Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
DAWWWWWWW
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Scotty1609 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student General Artist
ACK! So cuuuuuute!!!! Moar, moar, MOAR! :iconmoarplz:
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MurderScreamer Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Professional General Artist
haha X3 just do the opposite of England...
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:iconkalliat:
kalliat Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student General Artist
MOREMOREMORE
I beg this is so cute!
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Jessie1209 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student General Artist
Yay! Daddy I wuv you! Please, love meh! :iconchibicanadaplz:

Awesome story bro! Loved it from the first sentence! :iconbrohugplz:
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iNSaNiTY-Piano Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
Cuteness!
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sakurita123cami Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student
:iconloveloveplz: Aww. Daddy, you've got to love me! (Really you have to! I'm your goddamn daughter! D:<)

Lol. Continue please?
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XShadow-Wolf-DemonX Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student Writer
Daddy.

You don't take care of me, Texas might accidentally meet my foot. ouo
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WholeWheatHoneyOat Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013
Texas is AWESOME!!! More awesome than Prussia!!!!! 
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XShadow-Wolf-DemonX Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Student Writer
please don't reply to my old comments! I'd rather not be associated with the Hetalia fandom at all anymore, and seeing it in my messages really bothers me. thanks in advance! u v u
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WholeWheatHoneyOat Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013
Sorry. That was rude...
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stupidbread Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
DADDY! :iconiloveitplz:
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AngeloTheNinja Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Can't wait for the next part! :iconmoarplz:
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:iconthemysteriouspoet:
TheMysteriousPoet Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
oh my glob the fluff is slowly killing my insides!
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GizmoJax Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
haha glad you like it! I'm still working on your request too..it should be up soon!
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TheMysteriousPoet Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
okai!
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MasuraFox Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconbravoplz:
:iconmoarplz:
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Yuki-the-Trickster Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student General Artist
At first when I read this I was like: "Whoa! America that's mean to say!" Then I started to think "Hmmmm let's see how this goes." So I can't wait for more!
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TheDemoniteProject Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:3 America? My father. Put another star on the flag folks XD
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Yuki-the-Trickster Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student General Artist
lol!
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TheDemoniteProject Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for the lawls!
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Yuki-the-Trickster Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student General Artist
no problem!
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TheDemoniteProject Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:D *In a conversation that leads to no where now*
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Yuki-the-Trickster Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student General Artist
hahahaha lol!
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TheDemoniteProject Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well its true!
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VeroVi Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I like this alot, when is the next one coming out?!
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GizmoJax Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
By the end of the week (I hope)
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